Rat key

Overall, this is a pretty good book. I like the idea of the plot. I do not like the dialogue, though. It is rather choppy and unrealistic in some places. However, you have a well developed world and characters. I like that you can immediately imagine what Rat is like. I do not think that the way you deliver his thoughts are very good. This is a pretty good detailed book.The only problems that I really saw was the fact that the story changed from scene to scene almost instantly, and the scenes did not seem to last very long.